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Sunday, March 25, 2012
The Indecent Condition by Ana Star
While I understand this is only a 15-page short erotic novel, I have to say the pace was TOO fast- too many loopholes were evident. The proposition is made and then the financial aspects of the need for money come into play. This topic should have been stated before, if for any reason to make the story more believable and smooth.
Choppy dialogue and not enough feelings shared between Lucie and Mr. Vines left me craving more of a connection and perhaps even a realistic story line.
No obvious connection is made with the slight explanation from Mr. Vines that Lucie reminded him of his deceased wife- morbid but true. Not enough there to base a story on. Maybe if another 20 pages of storyline and dialogue were added this book would have had a chance of survival.
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