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Sunday, March 25, 2012

The Indecent Condition by Ana Star

Title: The Indecent Condition
Author: Ana Star
Sub-Genre(s): Erotic, Menage, Contemporary
Publisher: Written Expressions
Publication Date: September 18, 2011
ISBN #: B005O1AS6Q
Format: eBook from Author
Reviewer: cbls reviews
Rating: 3 Cups

Lucie’s contract with the museum she works at is coming to an end. In order for her to get a promotion she must accept the indecent condition the client has set for her. What is the condition and will she accept?

While I understand this is only a 15-page short erotic novel, I have to say the pace was TOO fast- too many loopholes were evident. The proposition is made and then the financial aspects of the need for money come into play. This topic should have been stated before, if for any reason to make the story more believable and smooth.
Choppy dialogue and not enough feelings shared between Lucie and Mr. Vines left me craving more of a connection and perhaps even a realistic story line.
No obvious connection is made with the slight explanation from Mr. Vines that Lucie reminded him of his deceased wife- morbid but true. Not enough there to base a story on. Maybe if another 20 pages of storyline and dialogue were added this book would have had a chance of survival.

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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I'm sorry you didn't like the story but thank you for taking the time to review it. I hope in the future that you read another story of mine, you will enjoy it more than this one.

thank you :)

ana star